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===== 1. Tighten repeated phrasing - Phrases like “aligns with unwritten Law… Living Law, not Legalism” are repeated in each subsection. Consider summarizing once, then briefly noting the distinctive aspect of each tradition. Example: > ===== # Clarify “Western Philosophy” phrasing - Some readers might find it counterintuitive that Hinduism or Taoism is grouped under Western Philosophy. A brief justification or reminder may help: > # Introduce Legalism contrast earlier - You mention Legalism at the end. Consider a one-line foreshadow at the start: > # Chapter 3 introduction - The imagery is strong (“riverbed, carved by the same current”), but the last sentence could connect more explicitly to sovereignty: >
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