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=== User: Please provide a detail breakdown and analysis of the following poem: === Please provide a detail breakdown and analysis of the following poem: Outer Shell The pressure exists Both inside and out The stone on my chest As my heart pushes doubt Unable to speak As my inner voice shouts Unable to think As I drink from dark fountains Pouring over the poorest Of my most porous mountains Brittle, intact, attacked with such malice Cringe at the facts that lack any true value Inherited merit from pain overshared No wonder we live on, the dying impaired If only the good die young, Then the young must suffer well To leave this pale, unstately prison Known as the body, the vessel, the cell A.K.A. our little slice of unpleasant, Our personal plot of hell And if you at all know what I mean Iβm sure you know it well And hate it deep until you're weary Because itβs the inner paint of the outer shell
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